Friday 23 October 2020

Letter to Mr Hall.

   Address: Makauri school

                                                                                                                 120 king road



Me and my team have investigated and analyzed and we have found that our flying fox does not work properly and we need your help. The flying fox has rust on the inside and it slows it down. Me and my team have thought about adding oil and cleaning the rust off, but we want your appion first seeing as your the the expert


We also need help with the handle it wobbles a bit meaning it is loose and unstable. But me and my team have thought about replacing it or changing the bots or screws that hold it together, again we need your appion on this act.


And lastly the rail. The rail is rusty and the paint is chipped but me and my team can handle that part, by cleaning the rust and painting it again but if you could save a bit of time we could help you with all parts in this operation and make our flying fox look and feel good as new.



Yours sincerely: O'ric cross   
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  1. Quinn M23 October 2020 at 13:38

    I love the the way that you put yours sincerely Oric I love that it feels like they want to do it more.

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